Outline Item
- An opening section
In this section I want to reflect on how
there has been a lot that has happened in my work process this semester. I want
to broadly talk about how I think I have changed.
Adaption of Outline Item
My rough draft of my introduction can be found here.
Hi Jake!
ReplyDeleteI think this is a great start to the final project. You know everything you want to talk about and even started videoing. I know this is your rough draft so the beginning and end where you start and stop the recording should be cut out for your final draft. I would also give yourself more credibility by introducing yourself more, maybe saying what year you are and your major. I would also include a more defined thesis statement. But overall it is a good start.