Editorial Report 2

This second editorial report kept the momentum I had for editing my paper going and helped me continue to make my paper the best it could be.

Selection From Rough Cut
https://docs.google.com/a/email.arizona.edu/document/d/1TeBzUjJ0NAxNL-7jxQ_Y-LhpA45GTY6E739eDIAoeLU/edit?usp=sharing

Re-edited Selection

https://docs.google.com/a/email.arizona.edu/document/d/1ysJTM8uzbCbvnxtILl8bnwZfe3G9FiUCRWFEXDjU1eI/edit?usp=sharing

1. How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

I made significant changes in what I said in this part of the paper, especially in one paragraph where I re-wrote multiple sentences. The way the sentences are written now I feel conveys my point a lot more effectively.

2. How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

I moved paragraphs around as well as added in-text citations in this part of the paper. Moving these paragraphs around made the paper flow better and have more of an impact on the reader.