Reading another classmates work
helps me realize that I have things to change about my project as well in order
to make it even stronger.
- The
name of the title and author for the project you reviewed.
I reviewed Emily Bond’s QRG, “The Kids Aren’t Alright”.
- A
working hyperlink to the project you reviewed.
- An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed.
The peer review activity that I selected was the form activity. I
wanted to comment on how well of a job that Emily used the conventions of a QRG
and make a few recommendations as well.
- An
explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in
other words, how did you help them make their work better?)
I believe I helped make her project better by helping her
establish more credibility in her project by eliminating the exclamation points
that she used in her rough draft.
- An
explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s
Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into
your feedback.
I incorporated the reference section from the Student’s Guide reading by helping her realize to fix her
links within her paper to have proper citing for the project.
·
One thing about their work
that you admired or think you could learn from.
One thing that Emily really does well is
help convey her opinion efficiently and in a way that is very convincing. She
uses great arguments to show that her point should be strongly considered.
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