Producing this podcast was the biggest concern that I had
looking forward to this project. I feel confident with my quality of work and
am looking forward to finishing the project.
1.
What
are you anticipating the post-production process to be like, based on what you
accomplished during the production phase?
I think that it will not be difficult as long
as I do not leave everything to the last minute. If I spread out the different
tasks that I need to complete, I will be able to spend time on each thing and
get it done well.
- Key
information about your particular project that you would like anyone who
peer reviews your draft to know.
I still need to add the references as well as cleaning up the
audio as well. I also need to add music throughout parts of the podcast. Also,
the subject that I am working with is not able to publish examples of their
work.
- Major
issues or weaknesses in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as
well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those
weaknesses).
Parts of the audio are weak in quality and I will need to work
with the program to fix these small bugs.
- Major
virtues or strengths in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as
well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those
strengths).
I believe that the audio flows well. The interviews as well as the
different sections seem to fit together and with the addition of music, it will
sound even better. I also think that my hooks are good.
Rough Draft
Hey Jack!
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I think that overall the content is very good. I especially enjoyed your introduction that explained how business is present and important in everyone's lives. However, the tone of the entire piece is slightly monotonous. I think 2 vary simple ways to fix this would be to insert a couple music clips between sections, or perhaps a "stinger" in the beginning in order to ad some variety and keep the audiences' interest. It might seem like a strange thing to suggest, but perhaps varying the tone and inflection in your voice could also help. I also thought it sounded as though you had some awkward pauses in there. Perhaps having a loose script at the ready would help solve the at problem.
Hope this helps.
Michaela
Hi Jack, I reviewed your rough edit in terms of its form:
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